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Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« on: May 21, 2010, 12:21:29 pm »
Okay I haven't seen anything about this but I thought I'd ask anyway as it confuses me just alittle.

In BC on pg 241(Hard Cover) a paragraph is written:

I snatched them and put them on. Then I hopped up and went to the bathroom, where the rest of my clothes were. I dressed, took a step toward the bathroom, and had a flash back.....

I thought she was already in the bathroom...if that's the case how is she then taking a step towards it if she's already there. I may just be being dense (husband says my head is as dense as wet sand sometimes lol) or is it a typo?


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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2010, 02:08:18 pm »
I just read it over, and it does indeed look like a typo.  Thanks for catching it!

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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2011, 10:51:32 pm »
On page 282 of "River Marked" Mercy muses "Their fatality had surprised me a little."
Um... Did you mean "their fatalism"?
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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #3 on: October 19, 2011, 10:18:35 pm »
Blood Bound pg 159: Aspen Springs typo instead of Aspen Creek
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« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2011, 05:57:57 am »
Added, thanks! :)

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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #5 on: October 20, 2011, 06:10:09 am »
Feel free to submit any potential errors or mistakes to this thread.  Please provide the page number, title of the book, and when possible the complete quote.

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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #6 on: October 20, 2011, 03:21:19 pm »
Ah, there was a word choice I'd posted in "Ask Patty", about word choice... this is the right place for it, I think!  Trying to find it at this point, though...  eep!
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Fair Game error
« Reply #7 on: March 18, 2012, 11:18:30 am »
Towards the end of the book, Anna thinks something about Charles having killed Justin.  Actually, Boyd, 3rd in the Chicago pack (now alpha) shot Justin when he was about to attack Charles.  (No page because I'm listening to the audio book, but the scene is when Anna is in the cage.)
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« Reply #8 on: March 18, 2012, 01:18:20 pm »
Thank you, I'll take a look at FG and find the reference to check/add.

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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #9 on: March 18, 2012, 01:21:07 pm »
We should find both references; the A&O page for Boyd shooting J, & the FG page for the mis-speaking.
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« Reply #10 on: May 10, 2012, 10:03:02 am »
Here's a very minor (and extremely subtle) continuity one from Fair Game.

This is the U.S. hardcover edition, pages 61-62

The scene is where Charles and Anna are reviewing the pictures and case-history of the "Big Game Hunter" in their first meeting with the FBI, Cantrip, and Homeland Security.

1)  Goldstein shows pictures of 3 victims from 1984, one of whom (Melissa Snow) Charles recognizes

2)  Three paragraphs later, it begins:  "In the next year's group of victims, Charles recognized two of the three."  The implication is that this must be 1985, since 1984 had just been shown.

3)  Two paragraphs later, it begins:  "Charles knew three of the victims in 1985 and all of the bodies found in 1986."

Also a very small and minor thing, which can be partly explained away:

1)  Goldstein is described as being in his fifties

2)  The story itself appears to take place around 2012

3)  On Page 61, Goldstein says, "Here's where we came in, the FBI - it was before my time.  I first hit this case as a rookie in 2000."

4)  Given the timeline and his age, this implies Goldstein was a rookie around age 40.  It isn't unheard-of that a person might transfer from law enforcement or another agency at that point in their career.  Although "as a rookie" usually implies a little more than simply being new to the FBI and more like new to law enforcement generally.  I almost had the impression this scene might have originally had that line spoken by Leslie Fisher, but later changed so Goldstein was leading the show while retaining Fisher's spoken line.  In the Prologue, Fisher was age 8 in 1984 when the fae came out.  In 2000 she would be 24, the right age to be a rookie going into the FBI.
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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #11 on: May 10, 2012, 10:14:18 am »
The showing/not showing the bodies in the pictures, and the runes that might have been cut into faces (as happened to Lizzie Beauclaire) confused me, too.
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« Reply #12 on: May 11, 2012, 08:13:41 am »
Thanks, I'll take a look and update the section.

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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #13 on: May 19, 2012, 10:42:52 am »
With regards to Number 4)

"Rookie" can also pertain to an Internal transfer from an Office Position to a Field Position, or from say Burglary/Robbery to Homicide.
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« Reply #14 on: May 19, 2012, 10:47:28 am »
Right, like McGee on NCIS was a tech agent who got transferred to field.
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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #15 on: May 20, 2012, 03:14:47 am »
Noted.

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« Reply #16 on: February 18, 2013, 10:44:51 am »
Hi, I think I found an inconsistency in Fair Game.
On page 216 Anna is entering the party in The Irish Wolfhound with Isaac. After the waitress’s piercing whistle Anna can pick out the werewolves. “She recognized Malcolm , of course, but there were three others in the room, too.”
So if I am reading it right there would be six werewolves (Isaac, Anna, Malcolm and three unnamed ones).
But farther down on the page it says “if seven were werewolves, …” And on the next page “to Leslie that there were six other werewolves – Isaac and his five pack mates – in the room.”

So it seems to me this doesn’t add up ;-) Or am I missing something?

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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #17 on: February 19, 2013, 05:43:53 am »
By the way, the page number is from the paperback. I read somewhere you should use those from the hardcover, but I don't own that. I guess you will be able to find the scene I mentioned anyway.

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« Reply #18 on: February 19, 2013, 11:48:04 am »
Thanks, I'll take a look!

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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #19 on: December 15, 2013, 12:31:09 am »
Just re-reading a bit of Iron Kissed & came across this:
pg 259, Ben refers to "the TWO subs in the pack."
Is it already up?
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« Reply #20 on: December 15, 2013, 12:40:39 am »
I always figured he was referring to Honey because she took her place from her mate's position.
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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #21 on: December 15, 2013, 12:44:26 am »
In researching this (casually) I thought I saw a spot where it said there were possibly as many as three.
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Re: Errors, Corrections, & Mistakes
« Reply #22 on: January 30, 2019, 08:41:20 am »
Error at the end of Silence Fallen, Cast of Characters, Friends and Foe, last entry:
”Ariane, silver-borne fae who…”
Ariane isn`t silver borne but made the fae artifact the Silver Borne.

SB chapter 12 paperback page 232:
Ariane… “forged it of silver and magic and her blood”
FB chapter 2 paperback page 26:
“The Silver Borne was an artifact that she`d created…”